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Post by xXTotallySimsXx on Apr 8, 2011 2:13:35 GMT
I know this is supposed to be for sims, but I am hoping one day it will be a sims story. “Hello?” I whispered in the cold rain. Little droplets rolled down my face, then down my neck and torso, and off my legs. Freezing and defeated, I stood in the rain. The others had won the battle, and I was the only one person left of my kind. A mother bird sat in her nest, her babies chirping away. Did they feel the same sorrow. I ran my pale hand through my black hair, beginning to cry. I had let everyone down.Thoughts?
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tazluver2012
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I'm just that classy :)
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Post by tazluver2012 on Apr 8, 2011 2:36:58 GMT
It's amazing! I really really really really (is that enough really's because I can and will add more XD ) anyways I really really really hope you make that in to a sims story, because I would LOVE to read it.
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Post by xXTotallySimsXx on Apr 8, 2011 16:20:23 GMT
Thank you tazluver2012!
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Post by Amy (In America - Busy atm) on Apr 8, 2011 22:21:38 GMT
I think its very good, the story looks promising
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