akate
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Post by akate on Apr 8, 2011 8:58:58 GMT
I want to write a story about a girl who gets married at sixteen, thinking she's in love. I need you help deciding how to go about it. I have one start, it starts off as she's nineteen, and I cant explain much more, it'll ruin it, but she's been married for three years and finding it a bit harder. The next one would be when she's sixteen and going through the struggle of getting parents permission, getting bullied and stared at for being married so young. Which one should I do? Thanks in advance
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Post by bri1042 on Apr 8, 2011 9:06:37 GMT
I think you should do the one that starts off with the girl being nineteen because then she can elaborate on whether or not she regrets her decision and how she feels about it. (:
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Post by akate on Apr 8, 2011 9:09:17 GMT
Thanks, I was going toward more of the nineteen year old one, but thought maybe I could start off with sixteen. I also think the nineteen year old one would be better. Thanks heaps ^_^
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Post by tazluver2012 on Apr 8, 2011 11:18:25 GMT
I think the nineteen year old one is a good one too. it gives you a little bit more to play with, since you can do more with flashbacks and character building
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akate
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Post by akate on Apr 8, 2011 12:24:41 GMT
Thanks. I might post the first paragraph when I write a bit more on the story, and decide whether or not I want to make it into a Sim story or not
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Post by jessilsims2 on Apr 8, 2011 16:18:29 GMT
Starting at 19 seems to have a lot you can do with it! Let me know when you put up the paragraph!
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Post by Amy (In America - Busy atm) on Apr 8, 2011 22:22:39 GMT
I agree with everyone else, start in the present looking back
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Post by akate on Apr 9, 2011 10:31:14 GMT
I'm about to put the paragraph up, but by the time anyone reads this, it'll be up and everyone would have already seen it (if they open the link)
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