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Post by Sunny on Jul 29, 2011 5:08:12 GMT
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Post by slurpee101 on Jul 30, 2011 1:14:49 GMT
It was okay, but maybe because it was a little short I didn't get the full effect. I think when you expand on the family next chapter it'll be a little more enjoyable because there will be more personalities you can shape and play with. Maybe if you add more humor or if you make a spouse with a completely opposite personality for the next generation there will be more comedic situations.
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Post by FiliaSlayer on Jul 30, 2011 7:19:20 GMT
It's okay. I mean, it made me chuckle here and there.. which is a good thing I guess (luvs me some LOLin'). I wanna see where you go from there.. goodness.. think of the children. Won't someone please think of the children!!
Anywhew, I'd love to see anymore chapters you come out with if'n you don't mind posting.
Just thinking of Wally and Alix with anything living just.. woooo boy.
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Post by lavviejones on Aug 15, 2011 4:10:29 GMT
I like orange, and I love the hats.
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Post by horsemadnicky11 on Aug 15, 2011 11:44:55 GMT
It was good ;D It also made me laugh ;D ;D ;D The hats were hilarious too  Can't wait for the next Chapter, maybe have it a bit longer though? |
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