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Post by legrande on Dec 12, 2011 1:23:56 GMT
Drew Roberts is an orphan. It's lucky for him that his stepmother still wants him around. It's lucky for her that he's there to look after his half- sister Monica. With Drew's father's recent death having shaken the family, it seems unlikely that Santa will be stopping at their apartment this year. However, Drew knows that this will break his little sister's heart, and is determined to make this year the best Christmas, ever. With his memories intertwining with his idea, and the influence of his mysterious older sister Riley helping him at every turn, can he pull off his plan before the big day? I apologise for the lack of pictures to accompany this first chapter, but honestly, I will get some taken. Soon. I just wanted to get this out there so that there's a greater chance that I'll finish it before the 25th, or thereabouts. I'd love to know what anyone thinks!
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Post by legrande on Dec 14, 2011 18:08:03 GMT
*I've now added pictures*
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Post by slurpee101 on Dec 18, 2011 23:30:44 GMT
It was good. The pictures were nice to look at and the dialogue and descriptions did not bog down the story.
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